In this classic line from Shakespeare's Romeo and Juliet, Romeo spots a light coming from Juliets bedroom, causing him to compare Juliet to a sunrise an image that evokes a sense of wonder, hope, and happiness. No one can get in except for me. It may be the second smallest room in the house but Im proud to call it mine.This style of bedroom works well for me and fits me perfectly. You would see all my clothes on my floor if you walked up stairs and all the undies on the floor could date back a month. The polaroid camera doesn't have anywhere else to go so it just sits on my desk. The scary closet. But all of this is because the entire house is new, in fact it's not even finished!, although with all these bonuses I don't go into my bedroom that often. 2. as far apart as the poles. Their curtains black out light, their chairs all face the television, theres surround sound speakers, and of course theres an enormous flat screen TV on the wall! It's very clean and healthy room,well it wouldnt be clean without my mother, of course, sometimes you just need her to boss you around. The touch, it's soft, smooth and warm at night. There are photos of my family and a painting that I did myself. I have white walls and chocolate brown curtains. On one of the walls, near the corner is a little round painting of a light blue owl from my hometown Raglan along with another small, colourful painting of the words I love you. Great descriptive peace of writing and it really felt like I was in your room. I could clearly see your room just by the way you described it. I have massive two windows that take up almost all of the wall. Overall well done. You need to work on capital letters (eg. I give you a 4. Bunkhouse Western Fabric, No one's room is black and white they all have colours and mine has definitely got a lot of colours. Personally I love my I wouldnt say that I have a colour theme in my room but if I had to say what colours stood out to me I would say all shades of blue, pink and green. Your editing hasn't been done too poorly Joel. On my blue wall there is a white butterfly that sits on a hook. I hate tidying my room but this is something that needs to be done more often. Jackson 2x4 Auto Darkening Lens, 4. All kinds of blue from baby blue to electric blue to sky blue - there is a lot of blue. It has two doors, one window that opens slightly and two loud heaters that break the cold silence in the night. By William Wightman 8WH. Also you repeat a lot of your facts over and over again, making this writing boring to read as I am just reading the same writing again and again. The material on this site can not be reproduced, distributed, transmitted, cached or otherwise used, except with prior written permission of Multiply. So in conclusion my bedroom is the best in the house because it soft, layout just for me the colors just right and last of all it's the only place in the whole house where I can get some alone time and not be nagged! Beside that there is my mini bookcase that is full of unread books, over from that there is my wardrobe full of junk and extra clothes. I think that it is still also good to keep using basic words. You can imagine a mother of 3 or 4 children calling her home a zoo. I have a chair that is very sturdy but comfortable and a table which is birch with white markings and has a curve on the end. My layout, I think the layout of my room is perfect because my cabin bed, like the top half of of a bunk bed, is at the far end and looking over the entire room, apart from what's underneath it. The colours in your room must be very bright with the sun on it and I can visualise your room. Very descriptive and easy to imagine your bedroom and feel how special it is to you. The clothes are untidy because they cant fit into each draw. Look at the picture and make sentences to describe the bedroom. I need to make sure the cloths are not on my desk they need to be in my dresser or in my closet. (He is messy.) My turquoise blanket has a delicate touch, so fluffy you want to take it everywhere. If you go into My room you will probably think it's really big and very messy, and the first thing you will see is the pink wallpaper and the rips and sellotape on the walls. Yas finally im home, don't you just love after a long day at school you can race to you bedroom and just chill out on your bed. You used the right punctuation in the right places and I didn't see any mistakes. You really made me think of what your room would've looked like with your little brothers toy box and with the bog window and the red wall. They are stacked up quite messily. They are happy to enjoy the predictable lives they have, rather than search for an exciting purpose in their existence. All you can see is the drive way and trees. My bedroom. My pictures, my belongings, my personal space. The set up in my room. There are books all over the place. The other side of the room has my single bed crammed in the corner by the door. I suck creamy cock. The layout of my medium-sized hideout is spacious, and being L shaped, it permits a reasonably large area to dance crazily around, spend quality time with friends or complete therapeutic craft activities. Virgo Descendant: Personality Traits and Compatibility, Taurus Descendant: Personality Traits and Compatibility, Scorpio Descendant: Personality Traits and Compatibility. Under this window is my computer desk with a small draw and a slot for a keyboard giving a nice place to work. Well done. On the other side (the right hand side) there are 2 dressers a long short one with lots of stuff on it (my one) and a thin tall one with models on it (Jacksons one). I enjoyed the comparison you made between the mess and cleanliness. I have a wooden modern looking bed side table where I put my trophies and books. Both beds are king single, with 3-4 pillows and very comfy sheets. On my bed is a light purple duvet with a big blanket folded on the end. On Sams desk, which is to the left of his bed and bedside table, sits a monitor, which plugs into a PS4, and quite a dusty one, mind you. Other than for sleeping I use my bedroom to do my homework (at my desk), catch up with all the goss on social media and of course as a space to be alone for a little while. David Silverman Simpsons Net Worth, When you walk into my room youll see my bed in the far right corner. I have got posters on all the walls in my room and they almost cover up my well one of my walls. Its got a squishy top. It is the largest bedroom in the house it is rectangular and has a built in wardrobe. That is why I think my bedroom is the best place in the house. Penultimate par5agraph the full stop at the end goes inside of the brackets. My half of the bedroom is on the east side of the house, meaning that Im directly in front of one of our three gardens. The furniture in my room is rather basic. I pull it out when friends come to stay. These are 5 words you would use to describe my bedroom. My tv is sitting in the corner of the room but is easy to see because of the size, it is 39 inches and cool looking. So my layout might be tight, but it works for me. There is also a tall boy and an inbuilt wardrobe where I keep all of my shirts for school. The Five Imdb Parents Guide, These are placed where there is one up and one down all along the top of the wall. The bed is the main part of any bedroom because that's where everyone spends the most time. Interesting imagination Teatukura. I usually put it on my birch table. On the other side a white storage couch with a picnic basket design, inside are teddy bears that had been given to me over the years and have sentimental value. Well I have a double bed that is really comfy and warm, a laundry basket that is full. sleeps in my room. Your punctuation was good. On the door it has my name (Will) and other things I made in hard materials. The view outside my window is not the best. It has a great layout because of the way that my comfy double bed gets most of the sun.As you open the door to my bedroom a sudden warmth invites you in. It's not really the best looking room because it's really messy and has light pink wallpaper. The space of my room is quite small, but if you take out my draws it's a massive space. good work. Three quarters of my room is engulfed in clothes and mess. I liked the way that you used the senses to give a more detailed effect about your bedroom. And I don't have to worry about other siblings entering my space. On your left will be a built in cupboard for my clothes and other things. My bedroom is down the hallway on the right next to the big purple bathroom. My black guitar leans up against my drawers and on top of my drawers there is an orange word that says Brave. Even though my drawers, desk, bedside table, curtains and walls are all white. Every room needs furniture to make it yours and in my room the most important piece of furniture is my bed. My mum sees I have to clean my room each day. (The shark's teeth are sharp.) You described thing very well. My parents make me keep it tidy for good habits. Writing By Brody Kershaw. My room is small so it is easy to spot it's messiness. I think that you could work on adding a few more descriptive words. My king-single bed is placed directly in the middle of my room with my dresser, containing all of my clothes, on the left hand side. The carpet is a dark brown colour that is nice and soft. I also enjoy the posters in my room, they describe who I am inspired by and what I also like. Cleanliness is key for a happy mum. Warmth of a Smile (Simile) Jack likes listening to different stories of his Grandma, and when he speaks with her, Jack notices that lines around her mouth are like sun rays. This comparison illuminates the fact that his Grandma is a good-natured and kind person whose kindness warms like sun rays. Its the biggest bedroom in the house and that's why I like it. As I wade through the swamp of clutter I find things I lost from months ago. I like the way you've used a lot of punctuation in your writing with full stops used correctly, spacing after a comma and capital letters after full stops. Im going to tell you four things about my room, the layout, accessories, colours and finally the style of the room. The style of my room is a beach theme. My accessories are very colourful, my pens and pencils are all kinds of colours. I love it because it is the only room in my house where I can lock myself away from the rest of the world. If you walk into my room and look to the left you will see my bed and bedside cabinet, look to the far left corner and you will see my drums, then look to the far right corner is my dresser with all my old toys on top, and some lego technic then beside that is my desk/bookshelf and if you glance at the floor you will see the mess. You used interesting words that I haven't heard of before. Furniture in my room is perfect. Also there were some little things like having i instead of I that you could of fixed. I really liked that you had some really awesome words in your writing that really hooked me in and made it more intresting to keep on reading along. 7. as broad as Heavens expanse. A metaphor for a bedroom could be, " His bedroom is like a sauna since the air conditioner broke." I think you edited your writing well ,I could only find one spelling mistake! e.g, the size of your bed, and the colours of your bed covers. It's unique to me and cosy for my cat it's one of my favourite rooms in the house and has all the colours that I think fits me. Next your eyes will settle upon my short and skinny box shelf that is as black as the night with draws both as blue as the sea and as green as the algae the resides in it. I love the way you have proven that your room is one of your favourite places. you have used lots of good descriptive word and you spelling is good as well. The bedframe has a big headboard and a smaller board at my feet. The simplest way to make a metaphor is to use this pattern: First noun + to be verb + a/an + second noun She is an angel. The decoration part for my room. As you walk up the old skinny hallway, at the end, opposite the bathroom, you will find a bedroom,which you'd agreed looks like a bomb has gone off and spread all the junk everywhere, and yes its my bedroom, possibly the messiest in the house. Love Mum x. DOOGIES BEDROOM My bedroom has been personalized specifically for me because of my homemade bed, my sky-light, the colours and the layout. Just below bed there are the studying tables for homework and other work. I like her use of descriptive words and the slight humour. The second style of my room is boys simply because its a boys only room for me and Jackson to share. I have a few pillows that sit on my bed and I think that they help tie my room and it's theme together. I would give you a 3+, Great bit of writing and very accurate on what Angus's room looks and smells like. Inspirational messages can be viewed on plaques, saying things such as dream, see beauty in everything, or friends are the family we choose for ourselves. The word believe is arched across the door to my wardrobe. Like it get messy easily, not a lot of room to have fun and other thing. eg Self fun. (She is a nice.) Feed-forward - I can't think of anything bad about this (For this category at least) great job! It is a large room that comes out of the side but barely gets any sunlight and heat. Antenna Tv Buffalo, My room is a pigsty it has clothes all over the floor, shoes all over the floor and of course food plates that my dog has cleaned up. To your left is a white table for doing homework on. Here, were creating a metaphor by saying a person is our home. But it could be neater and all the belongings could be organised. Sometimes I come home and I see the floor for once because my Mum hates the mess I make in the room. Next time try used some words less for example the word 'and'. One the style two how clean it is three my senses and finally my furniture. I move things around to make it look tidy. I hop into my cosy bed. My room is VERY messy. Next time your could probably add some more descriptive words, not saying that there was not any but just add some more in like more bigger descriptive words. I agree that it needs to be cleaner! My room feels very charismatic and lively, as though a lot is happening in a single space. Or, it is a metaphor that could be used if you have just cooked a big messy meal and turned around to see that there is flour and vegetable scraps and plates and bowls all over the counter. But one thing that does make it dirty is my bird Percy, he leaves his seeds all over the floor and makes it the messiest. Because if you dont and try wade through all the clothes spread out and risk breaking your leg or ankle on toy cars or getting bits of lego stuck between your toes. The bedside table is filled with tangled plugs, wires and even a pringles can. Sometimes I play music from my bluetooth speaker and my brother comes in and screams and dances along to the music. My lamp is blue with a very bright light. My favourite part of my room sitting next to the window is my single bed. NSL: be more bold with good words to catch the readers attention and to take them on a journey. I have loads of different accessories in my bedroom. The cast on My room is average but not like an average kids bedroom, my room is very organised where all my clothes go. My room is not too empty but its not too full either. On the floor there is all my stuff for my I-Pod and I-Phone like my charger and headphones which are plain white and usually tangled up. My curtains are dark blue so if a have a sleep in the day it seems like it's night. Finally, the coldness, if its snowing that cup of water is frozen almost solid, I had to use three blankets those mourning, it gets really chilly. But you did miss out a few commas. Yeah I know I left it messy on monday but I promise you I cleaned it up as soon as I got home [wink wink]. 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